But no one's ever left me quite this sore
Your words cut deeper than a knife
Now I need someone to breathe me back to life
Got a feeling that I'm going under
But I know that I'll make it out alive
If I quit calling you my lover
Move on
You watch me bleed until I can't breathe
Shaking, falling onto my knees
And now that I'm without your kisses
I'll be needing stitches
Tripping over myself
Aching, begging you to come help
And now that I'm without your kisses
I'll be needing stitches
Just like a moth drawn to a flame
Oh, you lured me in, I couldn't sense the pain
Your bitter heart cold to the touch
Now I'm gonna reap what I sow
I'm left seeing red on my own
By this song being about a heart break it can relate to many
people and the use of the metaphor ‘your words cut deeper than I knife’ emphasises
the pain he is going through with the noun ‘’cut’’. The adjective ‘deeper’
suggests that the pain is internal and has engraved him, due to the noun ‘‘knife’’
having the connotations of scars and violence. By the line starting with the determiner ‘‘your’’
makes the audience connect with what is about to be said, as we do not know who
he is addressing this too specifically; making us want to engage with the
lyrics. The use of personification in the line after extends on how painful the
heartbreak was for him as he states ‘I need someone to breathe me back to life’.
This implies that he felt as though he has been killed and the verb ‘’breathe’’
suggests that it took all the life from him. This will make the receiver either
feel fortunate to not be in that situation or, on the other hand, relate to
him. This is not what you expect as he is singing about a certain someone who
did this to him. However it does affect multiple audiences.
In the third verse, the singer uses a simile at the beginning.
He uses the noun of a ‘’moth’’ to relate himself to which shows how powerless he
feels, because the adjective ‘’drawn’’ implies he had no will-power. The
connotations of the noun ‘’flame’’ are adjectives like burning, adverbs like
dangerous and nouns like ash which are all negative. However, the singer knows
that the flame is dangerous as he says ‘I couldn’t sense the pain’. This may be
confusing for the audience if they have never been through this because even
though he knew it was dangerous, he still went there.
In the chorus the line
‘ I’ll be needing stiches’ is repeated twice which then gets you locked onto
those words. The commanding form of this statement is quite aggressive which would
suggests that he is getting stressed. But it does not come across in this way as he has
used the contraction ‘I’ll’, which makes it less formal. Because of this the
noun ‘needing’ sounds less forceful.
Good close analysis. How is the presumed writer representing himself? As a victim? As a willing participant? As a lover? All of these and more? Try and work out how these techniques communicate meaning about him to see how he is represented. Do all audiences see him the way he seems to be wanting to be seen?
ReplyDeletegood analysis of different parts of the lyrics and how they can be interpreted from his point of view. try and suggest how he is to the other person after the breakup such as a victim.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have looked many parts of the song and analysed them in depth. You could maybe look at the quote "move on" as this shows he wants to get away from the heartbreak and pain the relationship caused.
ReplyDeleteGood choice of analysis, try suggesting how it might help he victim portray the way they feel towards the person who is hurting them and how might the song reflect on them instead of the victim.
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