Comparing two different types of text
Because
this article is online to be able to read it -unless it has been shared- you
will have to go online yourself and search it up. This implies that the
audience may be looking for advice as they are manually ‘looking’ for the
information. This shows that you will
only do this if you are interested in the topic or are looking for advice for
others. On the other hand if it was in a newspaper, you would read it if your
eyes come across it or you is concerned about the incident.
I believe
that the primary audience of this article are people who know someone who is
getting bullied, as if you’re getting bullied yourself you would not want to
read about people committing suicide by something you are experiencing. As well
as people looking for advice, I believe the primary audience will be woman as
its proven that woman go onto the daily mail online website more than men. This
could be why the sidebar articles are more ‘gossipy’ and celebrity based. The
header to the article starts with the concrete noun ‘boy’ suggesting him being
young and innocent. The use of this word may also be due to the audience being
more female heavy as woman with children can relate as ‘boy’ implies someone
who needs to be looked after and comforted as they are not an independent man
yet.
A
secondary audience however may just be a person who reads the daily mail
regularly and if this is the case, they will be attracted to the type of news
they broadcast (as well as this article).I also think this will be the older
generation as the adverb ‘daily’ implies that there are updates 24/7 so new
news frequently, Whereas teenagers -for example- will not read online articles
every day even though teenagers are more likely to be online than any other age
group. In addition to this, the article may be online to try and inform
teenagers about suicides from bullying as the victim was nearly a teenager
himself. But it could also be informing anyone else interested about the
incidence. A secondary purpose of this
article may be to educate people on the extreme effects of bullying and as they
have used a real life situation to do so, will allow people to relate more and
hopefully not go down the same path-bullying or committing suicide because of
it-.
When looking
at this article you do not expect it to be colourful or have many images as it
is a serious and miserable topic. On the other hand by having an image it may
create an emotional attachment between the reader and the story. This also
links to the expectations of an online article as you do expect online articles
to catch your eye as you are able to click off and go on another article at any
moment as easy as pressing a button. So I did not expect the sidebar adverts to
be more appealing than the article itself as it will make the reader be drawn
to those more reducing their attention on the article on the boys suicide.
This poster will be appealing to
the younger eye as its geographical features make it less formal. This includes
the gun image suggesting danger and pain and the word art which makes you want
to give your attention to the poster, as it creates an urge to read it and find
out what it says.
I think
the targeted audience is young people- including teenagers – as cyber bullying
occurs more in these generations as it is all over text (which is all what
teenagers do now are days).In particularly though, I think it is aimed at
bullies as the punchy simple sentence ‘STOP THE HATE’ is coming across in a
demanding and not pleasant way as it is not asking…it is telling. I think the
poster could also attract people who are maybe thinking of or getting into being
a bully as the abstract nouns ‘hate’ and ‘hurt’ and the concrete noun ‘deaths’
imply hell therefore not a nice thing to be involved in. The word ‘hate’
suggests isolation for the person being hated upon which consequently, no one
wants to be. ‘Hurt’ suggests pain and discomfort which can be either mental or
physical so long term or short term. This shows how it can affect someone for
their whole life and could make the bully or people who are becoming one think
twice. The word ‘deaths’ suggest the end of a life for more than one person
giving the impression that you could also affect other people and not just the
person you are targeting .
The
expected audience is also the bullies as the gun suggest power and authority
over someone who is scared of you; you only have the power out of fright.
The
purpose of this poster I believe is to persuade bullies to stop bullying and to
persuade people to help in their own spare time as the verb ‘stop’ is
commanding and patronising. A secondary purpose of this poster could be to
inform people that by hating and hurting someone multiple times, you could end
up killing them. This is because ‘STOP THE DEATHS’ is in a darker shade than
‘STOP THE HATE’. The darker shade implies that it is more serious as it is more
visible rather than a faded red.
This poster
has many of the expectations of a stereotypical poster such as the short and
snappy quotes of repeated words like the verb ‘stop’ and the noun ‘words’. This
allows the reader to understand how
weapons are not just guns, knives and bombs for instance, but can also be
something as little as ‘words’ which you can control yourself. Therefore
everyone is in control of their own personal weapon which can do more harm than
others as it can kill without you knowing. This is shown in the quote ’words
are weapons and words can kill’.
The
poster and online article have a lot of differences and not just the different
genres they are. The target audiences for each are opposite to the other with
the article being aimed at people who are seeking help for others, or wanting
to find out more about suicides due to bullying. Whereas the poster is aimed at
bullies themselves due to the commanding verb ‘stop’ implying that they are trying to enforce the
message onto people to stop bullying as ‘words kill’.
The geographical
features are also different with the article only containing paragraphs of text
while the poster is using the image of a gun to get the ‘hurt’ and ‘kill’ message
across. This could be due to the fact the article is on a serious incident
which generally happened and has an older audience and the poster is aimed at
younger people who they are trying to get a messages across to so wanting to
come across less formal and more friendly with images and word art.
The
poster has used a range of different fonts and sizes whereas the article has
stuck with one font and size throughout (apart from the header which has to
stand out from the rest of the text to grab the audience’s attention).The range
of fonts and sixes the poster has used makes it more alluring and the colour
red along with it makes it alerting. Taking this into consideration, the
article is more boring and less alluring than the poster as by looking at it,
it does not look like an interesting read and so you will most likely scroll
past a lot of it. However as the article is not on a wall and will only have
your attention for a few seconds like a poster, it is able to conation more
information. Another reason could be because they have not got a younger
audience who do not like reading paragraphs of writing and this may well be the
reason why the poster does not do this.
The
purpose of the poster is to stop bullying from happening but the article
contains a story where bullying has already occurred, and so is using this real
life event for evidence –the poster does not contain any evidence so might be less
convincing to some-.
There is some lovely interpretation of meaning here and some good contextual analysis. Where you need to make changes to get the marks is that terminology needs to be the focus in order to explain how the techniques suit the context. You must, must, must compare the texts in each paragraph, picking comparable/contrastable features e.g. both text producers use a bold orthography to make a succinct key point. Check connotations vs conventions as you need to ensure you use terminology accurately. To see where you could include more terminology, you could have explored the use of the imperative sentence mood (when sentences start with a verb) in "stop cyber bullying" and the use of the triplet at the top and the summary of those as the main message beneath. You could even have said the producer uses anaphora to reach the intended reader (a repeated word or phrase at the start of consecutive phrases, clauses or sentences). You could then look at how all of those are suitable for the particular target audience and how they achieve the purposes, all in the same paragraph - link your points as when they are all separate, you can't get good AO1 marks.
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