British stereotypes: do mention the war, Please!
G- This text is an
extract from a newspaper article which answers why there is neither a date nor
by-line present due to it being the opening paragraph. Not all the
stereotypical connotations of a newspaper are present within this extract,
along with a strapline which is usually placed under the header. This implies
that no one with a high authority or status has a strong opinion on this topic
as stereotypically, a strapline consists of a quote from someone of power.
If this extract is online, the reader will have to be hooked
from the start due to their being many other articles and information on this
topic at easy reach. The use of an exclamation mark at the end of the header
may entice the reader to read on as it gives a sense of importance as the adverb
‘please’ is almost begging people to ‘mention the war’.
- Due to the abbreviation of the word Britons, the contraction ‘Brits’ implies that the target audience may be people who are educated with British people due to the author not using the collective noun ‘Britons’. Although ‘The Guardian’ is a British newspaper, the language used indicates that the article is not aimed at ‘Brits’ themselves. This is because the author is describing what ‘Brits’ are like and the 3rd person term ‘are’ suggest that this is aimed to educate people on British people. On the other hand, the audience could be British people as the author could be trying to persuade the people of Britain to change their stereotype of ‘class-conscious binge-drinkers’ as the verb ‘binge’ with the concrete noun ‘drinkers’ implies we are senseless and anti-social people. This suggest that all ‘Brits’ who are at the legal age to drink have no self-control. The collective noun ‘class’ implies unity yet with the adjective ‘conscious’ it suggests the British community is aware of the differences between groups of people, and so keep to what they know. Therefore, do not mix with everyone forming unity amongst all. Jonathan Freedland however does not feel this is the case as the verb ‘portrayed’ implies ‘Brits’ are just described in this way but it is not specifically true.
E-When reading the Header of this article ‘British stereotypes:
do mention the war, Please!’ you expect the content of it to be “taking the
micky” out of British people as the use of the punctuation of: a comma gives a
space to breath, which in this form implies that people are bored and fed-up of
Britons pleading all the time, the colon gives a sense that Britons mentioning the
war is the start to a list of things we do which are “annoying” and the exclamation
mark suggest urgency and as though this command is being shouted. The commanding
verb ‘do’ also implies urgency as it gives the impression Britons always ‘mention
the war’ referring to us as being aggressive.
However when you read
on, you get the sense that all these assumptions are just abbreviations and quick
thought stereotypes of Britons due to the concrete noun ‘thumbnail’ along with
the verb ‘sketch’ implying a thoughtless
image. Because of the author now “sticking
up” for Britons, you do not know how this controversial article is going to end.
Therefore the audience may be shocked with the ending as it concludes that not
only does the author think that these stereotypes are ‘not the whole picture’,
but that the author is also a fellow Briton. This shows that Britons know that
these stereotypes are made of them.
There is some good analysis here - work on integrating mixed aspects of the GRAPE into PEE analysis. You use some good terminology - it would benefit you to choose more longer key quotes and explore how they suit the GRAPE using a wider range of terminology and ensureing you touch on aspects of discourse as well as lexis and grammar.
ReplyDeleteAlso, 'biased' is the adjective, 'bias' is the noun. And The Guardian is a proper noun and needs capitals.
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